"He is listening to stories of London"(p.1)
Dick was twelve years old. He liked stories, and he was listening o stories of London. They were his favorite stories. He went to London. However children in London had sad faces. Dick was hungry. A man helped Dick. He had a daughter. Her name was Alice. There were mice in Dick's bedroom, but there is a cat too. The cat was his friend. Later Mr Smith(a man) gave Dick the cat. They went to castle to eat dinner with the king. "Oh, no, look", the king said, "it is the mice again!" Then, Dick's cat caught the mice. Dick got presents from he king. Finally Dick married with Alice.
Crook, M. (1996)
"Dick Whittington"(Penguin Young Readers)
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Dick was twelve years old. He liked stories, and he was listening o stories of London. They were his favorite stories. He went to London. However children in London had sad faces. Dick was hungry. A man helped Dick. He had a daughter. Her name was Alice. There were mice in Dick's bedroom, but there is a cat too. The cat was his friend. Later Mr Smith(a man) gave Dick the cat. They went to castle to eat dinner with the king. "Oh, no, look", the king said, "it is the mice again!" Then, Dick's cat caught the mice. Dick got presents from he king. Finally Dick married with Alice.
A new girl came to the school. She was in Biff and Chip's class. She was called Rosie, and she didn't look very friendly. Chip had a magic key. She wanted to see the magic key, so she made Chip take her home. The children went to Biff's room. Rosie looked at the magic key, but it wouldn't glow. But, as soon as Chip took the key, it began to glow. The magic key took the children on a new adventure. The magic key took the children to a school playground. The magic turned Rosie into a motor mouth, dinosaur brain, and parrot face. She regreted bulling her classmates. She became a friendly girl. 